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The Children Aren't Playing by =RavynCrescent:iconRavynCrescent:





I found God today
He was sitting on a park bench watching as no children play
On this bright and cheery day.
Asking, “Where are they?”
I was having mixed emotions; a conflict of what to say
“Can’t you hear the people when they pray?
It’s far too dangerous and too easy to stray.
This world is crumbling down,” I told Him
“Traffickers want to sell them
Kidnappers want to steal them
Murderers want to slay them
Parents… some of them have gone evil
Teachers… some of them have gone evil
Priests… some of them have gone evil
Where’s the escape?
Walking down the street a little boy gets taken
By a crime he was never taught exists.
They take him and they break him
Use him and abuse him
He gets stuck in this dark abyss
Sitting in her bedroom a little girl gets taken
By a face she was taught to love
He takes her and he breaks her
Use her and abuse her
She is told it’s something she should never speak of
Trapped and trapped again. Over and over
Staring out the window at a stained crimson clover
And hardly anyone wants to talk about it
Few want to scream and shout about it
They fall on deaf ears as people turn from the problem
Till it’s their turn, then they beg us “solve them”
Taught that the terms mean one thing till they are forced to see
Not a single one of them will ever be free
We’re being hunted all the time
Through all this filth and all this grime
It’s easy to see why the children stopped playing outside
When parents don’t even know how to help them hide
So now you see and now you know
The victims have nowhere to go
This system it can run so slow
There never seems to be an end to this blood flow
As we scream “no, no!”
But, there is time and we can grow…
We will need some more help, though…
Then once again, the children will play
On this bright and cheerful day.”
:iconravyncrescent:

Author's Comments

I know this has no defined rhyme scheme… At first, every single line was going to rhyme with the very first line, but it ended up being too forced. Then it was going to be every 7 lines would rhyme with each other (a,a,a,a,a,a,a b,b,b,b,b,b,b), but that ended up wrong. Then the first 7 rhymes, then the next 3, then 3, then 1 that was of no match to any line. It’s sort of chaotic after that… but that’s the point. As the emotion rises, the rhymes break. Then there’s the 7 time rhyme again and 2 lines to recap the beginning.

This poem is about Human Trafficking… a crime I was involved in as a child. A crime a lot of people don’t want to fight against because they have been tricked into believing it isn’t what it is. Human Trafficking is not prostitution. The term prostitution implies that there is a choice… even if that choice is “do I want to work today or lose my house?” It isn’t human smuggling, either. Victims are, more often than anything else, not trying to get into a country illegally.
Trafficking is slavery. In every way you were taught about in school. There are still slave auctions in America, and everyone is a potential victim.

I am and was a middle class girl half-white half-Inuit Indian. My captors were my father, his brother, and others I don’t know.

Most victims know their captors. They’re tricked. Boys can be easier because they won’t see it coming. Girls who travel in packs think there is safety in those numbers… but that’s not always the case. Often times, you’re just more targets to choose from and if you run, they’ll get the stragglers. Victims range from the ages of four (4) to fifty (50). Sometimes older and sometimes younger…newborns, just hours old, have been bought and sold in the sex trade; used and killed on their first day of life.

There is hope, though. There is a way to protect yourself and those you care about! We have a forum set up to teach about Trafficking in a way that is not strictly text and horrible stories that just make people feel sad. We do it in an uplifting way meant to prevent trafficking from happening, rather than simply speak about the victims already caught. Our goal is to prevent more victims from being caught, and to teach current victims ways to escape, because there are ways they simply do not know about!

I didn’t escape till I was 13. I wrote poetry about what was happening at my father’s house because I was afraid to openly talk about it. I thought my mother would be mad and abandon me, that the world would hate me for it… it seems so stupid now, but I honestly believed my father and the victims of this crime suffer the same fate!
The link to the forum is in my journal here, at the very top on the side. Please visit and join! You can share your short stories, get information on trafficking, and we greatly encourage you to, once you get the knowledge, write short poems about trafficking and post them here with an endnote instructing people to visit the forum! By spreading the word this way, we will save lives!

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:iconfelixneko:
This is a great poem that contains a lot of truths about human trafficking, points out that everyone at risk and shows how any parent or child that REALLY knows about it wouldn't feel safe going out to play anymore.

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:iconravyncrescent:
thanks ^_^ Definitely not my best work, but I know anyone who really cares about stopping trafficking will get the meaning and enjoy it! I just wanted an example of something super simple that anyone can do to help end slavery ^_^

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:iconfelixneko:
True! Even if this isn't your best, it's got some great imagery to it, and more importantly, soo much info about human trafficking! Explains it to people that don't know what it is, while at the same time able to help those who are trapped by it. That's not easy to do ^_^

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If trees could SCREAM... would we still cut them down?
Probably... if they screamed all the time.

Check out Predatorturnedprey.com!
:iconravyncrescent:
^_^ *hug*

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Help end Modern Day Slavery and win a +1 point for existence!
Thank you, ~Rursus for the avatar!
:iconnevah-ann:
It gets the point across and shows people what is out there. No one sees what's going on any more and this helps people to see that it is still going on and that it still happens. No one seems to care until it happens to them or to someone they love. We should try to stop it before that happens. Nice job.
:iconravyncrescent:
^_^ Thanks!!! I am SO glad you like it! Means a lot to me! And you obviously get the meaning!

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Help end Modern Day Slavery and win a +1 point for existence!
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:iconfelixneko:
*hugs back* ^_^

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If trees could SCREAM... would we still cut them down?
Probably... if they screamed all the time.

Check out Predatorturnedprey.com!
:icontasha9090:
it was great ravyn! i was really moved by it and even my small brain understood the emotion and meaning behind it all.

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:iconravyncrescent:
aww, thank you, but you don't have a small brain! You're a very intelligent and wonderful person!

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